It’s really good . But I don’t think he shd have said the movements like that. The student shd think himself than following. It’s not like the mc will be there all the time to say those
Its really not, how did the mc become powerful? What happened? The pace is all over the place and its trying to be funny but its just cringe and the mc is too powerful from the start.
Dimeee
It’s really good . But I don’t think he shd have said the movements like that. The student shd think himself than following. It’s not like the mc will be there all the time to say those
Sumiria
This is really good :0
Retro reader
Its really not, how did the mc become powerful? What happened? The pace is all over the place and its trying to be funny but its just cringe and the mc is too powerful from the start.