Thirding everything said below. Kids their age, at best, giggle over phallic shaped objects. This author ripped dialogue from, like, a teen romance love interest and gave it to our 9 yr old ML… It’s also a trap, since FL has the mind and tastes of a full grown woman.
Wait a damn moment there
She’s five years old and he’s nine
A lil kid can ask a question like she did about the transformation out of curiosity
But his reply and everything after that feels completely out of place! They’re too young to know stuff like that
She has reincarnated ofc so she knows, but HE? How does he know? All he ever did in his life was taken away in an abandoned place and being tortured everyday. Like. From where the heck did this come from???
The author has had to be drunk when writing this part of the story, seriously!
I mean a 9yrs old whos been confined since birth, who hasn’t even seen the light of day properly talking bout ‘perverted thoughts’ and assuming a 5yrs old to be ‘drooling’ after his naked body?!!!!
WTF?!
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Even in our modern days society that children are exposed to mature content left and right, it still isnt common to see/hear something of this calibre from a child his age! A ‘confined-since-birth’ child at that!!! Let alone in a historical setting, with frequent abuse and psychological torment alongside the confinement to top it all off!
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I do like the story but I must admit this part was legit stupid! Sorry, author!
SSS Rank Cat Simp
No you aren’t grown up enough yet but you will be
Shiv bhatt
Shut up brat his face is punchable.
Avery
The faces she make are too hilarious
sariii
yes you are|
MiscMech
Thirding everything said below. Kids their age, at best, giggle over phallic shaped objects. This author ripped dialogue from, like, a teen romance love interest and gave it to our 9 yr old ML… It’s also a trap, since FL has the mind and tastes of a full grown woman.
Gasai
Wait a damn moment there
She’s five years old and he’s nine
A lil kid can ask a question like she did about the transformation out of curiosity
But his reply and everything after that feels completely out of place! They’re too young to know stuff like that
She has reincarnated ofc so she knows, but HE? How does he know? All he ever did in his life was taken away in an abandoned place and being tortured everyday. Like. From where the heck did this come from???
AArtsy
The author has had to be drunk when writing this part of the story, seriously!
I mean a 9yrs old whos been confined since birth, who hasn’t even seen the light of day properly talking bout ‘perverted thoughts’ and assuming a 5yrs old to be ‘drooling’ after his naked body?!!!!
WTF?!
.
Even in our modern days society that children are exposed to mature content left and right, it still isnt common to see/hear something of this calibre from a child his age! A ‘confined-since-birth’ child at that!!! Let alone in a historical setting, with frequent abuse and psychological torment alongside the confinement to top it all off!
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I do like the story but I must admit this part was legit stupid! Sorry, author!