I don’t know, maybe it’s my own fault for having such high expectations after the first, really good chapter of this story. – Now I’m extra disappointed that it’s developing so poorly. FML inclusive.
What’s with this sudden ‘damsel in distress’ cliché after she calls herself a sharpened blade?
And she’s supposed to be intelligent, not dumb!
Also why does the ML has to be someone, who’s the embodiment of a war god again?
These ‘I survived one bloody war zone after another, when I was young’ backstories are so overused and old. And honestly? These oh so badass knights, were portrayed as completely incompetent in this chapter too!
Just so the main characters could have a dramatic moment, I guess. It’s so ridiculous.
And don’t even get me started on the scene with the wolf. Completely random.
I really thought I’d found a good story here, but now I’m completely unmotivated to read on. *sfz* ._.
Avalanche
I don’t know, maybe it’s my own fault for having such high expectations after the first, really good chapter of this story. – Now I’m extra disappointed that it’s developing so poorly. FML inclusive.
What’s with this sudden ‘damsel in distress’ cliché after she calls herself a sharpened blade?
And she’s supposed to be intelligent, not dumb!
Also why does the ML has to be someone, who’s the embodiment of a war god again?
These ‘I survived one bloody war zone after another, when I was young’ backstories are so overused and old. And honestly? These oh so badass knights, were portrayed as completely incompetent in this chapter too!
Just so the main characters could have a dramatic moment, I guess. It’s so ridiculous.
And don’t even get me started on the scene with the wolf. Completely random.
I really thought I’d found a good story here, but now I’m completely unmotivated to read on. *sfz* ._.
viireads
bro this maid finna 360 these families
BigDebo
So confused…ain’t that the maid from the Taylor family