*sigh* Nope, this guy does NOT look any different after a bit of face powder and a hair trim. And how can a freshly transmigrated person just whip up a fake identity for someone over one night? How is her father totally okay with this stranger who popped up out of nowhere and why does he believe his daughter’s mere word that the emperor has cancelled the engagement without any kind of document?
How old is the author? If s/he is just 13 or so, I won’t be too judgemental. But even then, I’d recommend thinking about the storyline just a tad bit longer before putting it down and making it into a comic/manhwa.
l0ckhart
These light touches are giving me a whiplash, but I’m here for it
Eveaustria
*sigh* Nope, this guy does NOT look any different after a bit of face powder and a hair trim. And how can a freshly transmigrated person just whip up a fake identity for someone over one night? How is her father totally okay with this stranger who popped up out of nowhere and why does he believe his daughter’s mere word that the emperor has cancelled the engagement without any kind of document?
How old is the author? If s/he is just 13 or so, I won’t be too judgemental. But even then, I’d recommend thinking about the storyline just a tad bit longer before putting it down and making it into a comic/manhwa.