The Villainess Can’t Take Revenge on Her Reaper Father - Chapter 3

the “I’m going to marry Papa” was funny and cute and had me wanting to continue this story cuz it didn’t feel like a compelling read…

but then for this grown man to seriously inquire about marrying his daughter…? jail time, immediately. the gag is dead and this writer needs help cuz they don’t know how to be funny, clever, or pace a story well