If this is supposed to be love, then the author rushed it. The MC’s defining traits are strength and family loyalty, and that’s about it. From her point of view, there’s no real emotional buildup, so the romance feels forced rather than natural.
Ps. Ignore the previous comment, don’t know what I was writing.
If she’s in love then the author honestly forced the romance here. I mean the mc is strong but from the others view he seems that strength is all there is to him, yeah he like his family but if she’s only in love because he loves his family and is strong thats forced.
Retro reader
If this is supposed to be love, then the author rushed it. The MC’s defining traits are strength and family loyalty, and that’s about it. From her point of view, there’s no real emotional buildup, so the romance feels forced rather than natural.
Ps. Ignore the previous comment, don’t know what I was writing.
Retro reader
If she’s in love then the author honestly forced the romance here. I mean the mc is strong but from the others view he seems that strength is all there is to him, yeah he like his family but if she’s only in love because he loves his family and is strong thats forced.
Sylvalissa
Hahaha that blush at the end
CrazyBun
More!!!!!!!