You know, I like the story so far but archery is a personal hobby of mine and I really have to cringe at some of the artwork the artist has created so far. Imagine a professional archer in real life actually holding their bow by the bow arm instead of the handle to shoot an arrow. ( >‸‸‸ლ) Please, dear reader of this comment, scroll up and take another look at how our FL – a so-called pro with a bow[!] – holds her weapon. It’s ridiculous! :’D I had to laugh so hard. (๑’ヮ’๑) Nobody would shoot a bow that way, unless you wanna miss your target and look stupid at the same time. Sooo you’d think if archery is an essential skill for the main character in a story, then the story’s illustrator would have educated themselves on it and made an effort to make things look more realistic, but hey! I guess not. XD
Avalanche
You know, I like the story so far but archery is a personal hobby of mine and I really have to cringe at some of the artwork the artist has created so far. Imagine a professional archer in real life actually holding their bow by the bow arm instead of the handle to shoot an arrow. ( >‸‸‸ლ) Please, dear reader of this comment, scroll up and take another look at how our FL – a so-called pro with a bow[!] – holds her weapon. It’s ridiculous! :’D I had to laugh so hard. (๑’ヮ’๑) Nobody would shoot a bow that way, unless you wanna miss your target and look stupid at the same time. Sooo you’d think if archery is an essential skill for the main character in a story, then the story’s illustrator would have educated themselves on it and made an effort to make things look more realistic, but hey! I guess not. XD