I get that they need a “trinket” to get the story going, some sort o “oh but she’s a long lost magical ´princess will also become the heroine and clean everyone and everything out of her path” kinda thing, but at least, at the very least, take your time doing it.
In just one chapter, we went from the dame to cinderella (and a chat with the fairy god mother) to the blue lagoon to magical princess awakening her powers… too much in one chapter. specially without that much dialogue.
MexicanMary
I get that they need a “trinket” to get the story going, some sort o “oh but she’s a long lost magical ´princess will also become the heroine and clean everyone and everything out of her path” kinda thing, but at least, at the very least, take your time doing it.
In just one chapter, we went from the dame to cinderella (and a chat with the fairy god mother) to the blue lagoon to magical princess awakening her powers… too much in one chapter. specially without that much dialogue.
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divine power as an aphrodisiac – that’s new