I like the concept of this story. Edgar being Armin (my guess) and him regretting nuking his Wife’s people and hiding the secret because he wants to be seen as Edgar instead of Armin. But I feel the execution of the story isn’t good and you really feel the author flopping like fish in this chapter. I still have faith cuse author didn’t stall the story on the wedding. I just fear the author’s twisty twist plot isn’t going to be as twisty as they think it is. But who know I could be wrong and its fun to theorize.
Groudon97
I like the concept of this story. Edgar being Armin (my guess) and him regretting nuking his Wife’s people and hiding the secret because he wants to be seen as Edgar instead of Armin. But I feel the execution of the story isn’t good and you really feel the author flopping like fish in this chapter. I still have faith cuse author didn’t stall the story on the wedding. I just fear the author’s twisty twist plot isn’t going to be as twisty as they think it is. But who know I could be wrong and its fun to theorize.
vitrianna
mc: what are you doing?!
ml: removing my coat… why? want me to get naked?