No, dear author, you see, if your “intelligent, mastermind villain” is portrayed like a bumbling idiot to the readers, as you did in this chapter, she will not be taken as a serious threat as the story progresses.
Please try to make her look competent if you hope for a serious plot.
Kthxbye
Goaties
No, dear author, you see, if your “intelligent, mastermind villain” is portrayed like a bumbling idiot to the readers, as you did in this chapter, she will not be taken as a serious threat as the story progresses.
Please try to make her look competent if you hope for a serious plot.
Kthxbye