Why were so many panels wasted on that pink eyed bitch’s past? Her motivation for her repugnant behavior is irrelevant. Just skip to the part where her head is removed.
No, dear author, you see, if your “intelligent, mastermind villain” is portrayed like a bumbling idiot to the readers, as you did in this chapter, she will not be taken as a serious threat as the story progresses.
Please try to make her look competent if you hope for a serious plot.
Kthxbye
RavenJovan
Why were so many panels wasted on that pink eyed bitch’s past? Her motivation for her repugnant behavior is irrelevant. Just skip to the part where her head is removed.
BookObsession
Girl, he literally threw you out
Goaties
No, dear author, you see, if your “intelligent, mastermind villain” is portrayed like a bumbling idiot to the readers, as you did in this chapter, she will not be taken as a serious threat as the story progresses.
Please try to make her look competent if you hope for a serious plot.
Kthxbye