Picturing story from different perspective is what creates a good story. Stories that focus solely on one character without developing any other are copy pasted by dozens per year. It’s not hard to find smth shallow if you wish to. Here author clearly cares about his story and his characters.
From the small parts with Elodie, she is quite a pitiful person, there’s bias against her by the reader because the mc is already established and has our empathy, support and loyalty.
Our focus is firmly on our MCs side which is fine, but from these small snippets of other important characters we can see a larger picture forming. This is creating the setting of what is to come.
Elodie is obviously going to play an important role, so of course she needs some development otherwise what will come will feel sudden or random.
I can see any character from their own POV and their own reasons of why they would do something
This sometimes makes me annoyed when a story picturing different POV from its each character while what I wanted is to see the MC at the moment
Vivianne
Picturing story from different perspective is what creates a good story. Stories that focus solely on one character without developing any other are copy pasted by dozens per year. It’s not hard to find smth shallow if you wish to. Here author clearly cares about his story and his characters.
Thanks for translation ^^
Chakuku
It’s to give context and backstory.
From the small parts with Elodie, she is quite a pitiful person, there’s bias against her by the reader because the mc is already established and has our empathy, support and loyalty.
Our focus is firmly on our MCs side which is fine, but from these small snippets of other important characters we can see a larger picture forming. This is creating the setting of what is to come.
Elodie is obviously going to play an important role, so of course she needs some development otherwise what will come will feel sudden or random.
Dee307
Pulling my hair
The LaidBackMan
I can see any character from their own POV and their own reasons of why they would do something
This sometimes makes me annoyed when a story picturing different POV from its each character while what I wanted is to see the MC at the moment
Mintypepper
Totally agree with you
Why to make mc when decided to focus on everyone’s life.. Its so confusing and annoying
Narutos
Where is mc?