Hmmmm i like this story and the characters but the pacing keeps messing with me :/ like it just feels like it moves a bit fast without leaving the plot time to breathe? Overall I like it but I sort of wish I had more time to enjoy the setting. Idk, I’m no good at pacing either lol
Yeah, I know right, it just quickly moves to something else and doesn’t give enough time to process, either way, it’s still a good story. Maybe a bit too much like WMMAP but I would still read it because I like WMMAP.
PsychoPrincess
so is her dad has a brother?
busyplant
Hmmmm i like this story and the characters but the pacing keeps messing with me :/ like it just feels like it moves a bit fast without leaving the plot time to breathe? Overall I like it but I sort of wish I had more time to enjoy the setting. Idk, I’m no good at pacing either lol
Like so what
Yeah, I know right, it just quickly moves to something else and doesn’t give enough time to process, either way, it’s still a good story. Maybe a bit too much like WMMAP but I would still read it because I like WMMAP.