Spring Breeze of the Wasteland

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1. Tatianaaa

   Update please

   February 12, 2025 at 11:24 pm

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2. Baeklee Ee-Gang's Wife

   I actually like the story however I am not sure if I like the characters as well. The only character I like is Ian who is a little bundle of joy. This story, unlike many others stories nowadays, actually introduces us in-depth to the main character. I really like how they actually portray the afterlife of the fl who lived in the castle as a ghost and watched events unfold. Even though their isn’t much development in her character still I will continue to look forward to the future updates. It’s really interesting if you subtract the characters lack of communication 😑😑

   January 25, 2025 at 5:55 pm

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3. Lightning-Kun

   I tried to continue but chap 8 was my limit, such unlikable pathetic painfully braindead coward characters this story have, ML suffocates her to core whilst love her she is stupid not to see he love her and misinterpret but she ain’t wrong he sucks too bad, my problem is them banging each other resulting in child I don’t think they deserved that gift, also they both love each other yet “hate” is the word they use, then why’d you sleep with someone you hate??? so shitty so braindead they are worse than self exposing openly malicious villainess characters tbh

   January 20, 2025 at 6:17 am

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4. Lightning-Kun

   phew 7 chaps in leads are so
   -pathetic
   -stupid
   -dumb
   -coward
   -weak on the inside
   -sad on the outside
   -depression
   -weird
   -strange
   -unlikable
   -stubborn
   -unlikable
   -need sex edu
   -needs beating
   -needs common sense
   -need brain
   -learn how to use brain
   all the had to so was face their feelings be honest not this stupid shit of confinement and other shit

   January 19, 2025 at 6:24 pm

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5. Lightning-Kun

   @CRITIQUE QUEEN 👑 I agree FL lacks common sense but not only her ML too also they both are pathetic and needs sex education, so they use contraceptive prior to banging each other, poor child stuck b/w two man-woman-child pathetic combo

   January 19, 2025 at 6:18 pm

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6. Lightning-Kun

   6 chaps in ik leads are in pain have history blah blah bs but I want to slap them they both are coward pathetic dumb stupid weakling run away from their feelings making cute baby suffer, leads are weirdos that baby is making me dislike them

   January 19, 2025 at 6:16 pm

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7. CRITIQUE QUEEN 👑

   I WANT THE STORY TO ONLY FOCUS ON FL AND ML’S RELATIONSHIP. not about the fl meeting nobles or friends and socialising and whatsoever.. it’s fucking boring JUST DAMN IT FOCUS ON THE RELATIONSHIP THE ROMANCE!!!

   January 19, 2025 at 8:50 am

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8. CRITIQUE QUEEN 👑

   Okay, here’s my review:
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   The drama and tragic ending really made me cry.
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   The thing I don’t like is how dumb the FL is for finally realizing things, but it’s too late. Gosh, I don’t know, but maybe it’s because the FL lacks common sense, or maybe she’s just too focused on herself and the past, which makes her even more depressed.
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   I want the story to focus only on the FL and ML’s relationship. But the thing here is that she keeps meeting random people and having unnecessary conversations with them, which I find really annoying and boring. Chapters 19-20 were just wasted because of their never-ending conversation.

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   warning: YOU JUDGED MY REVIEW? YOU JUDGED MY OPINION? Just who ARE YOU? It’s not your business if all my reviews here are negative. I am saying what I see and what I understand. Don’t read my review and just scroll down if you don’t like it. Stop acting like you own this comment section. And let me say that we have something called ‘different perspectives and taste.’ If you don’t know what these things are, oh dear, search it first, including your brain that acting high and mighty here like as if your own opinion is only acceptable b*tch🖕🥱What’s the use of a comment section if only flowery comments are allowed? Lol, sorry, but half of the reader population are not plastic with a little rainbow pony brain.

   January 19, 2025 at 8:44 am

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   1. Alm33r

      Girl calm down, who’s been making u mad these days?

      January 19, 2025 at 2:50 pm
9. RuchieMR

   I truly like it. I like how a life of hated and lack of communication happened and how the understanding happened. Because it is understandable based on what is showed. There’s trauma but well put.
   I usually hate when it is like this because it is poorly done. I don’t want to spoil to other reader but I like the 10 first chapters and wish to read more.

   January 18, 2025 at 6:38 pm

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   1. CRITIQUE QUEEN 👑

      @RuchieMR exactly the lack of communication again 🙂. I don’t know but I’m only sad for the ml. the fl is just getting on my nerves for some reasons

      January 19, 2025 at 8:47 am