This had been largely good up to this point. A relatively tense thriller, with a decent level of intrigue, a smart FL who was able to outmaneuvre the antagonist, etc.
But the giant magical worm with a weakness to salt has just ruined all tension and intrigue, and demoted this to another bland fantasy reincarnation story.
Also how did the count even know where she’d be on her secret fetch quest to send an assassin?
Goaties
This had been largely good up to this point. A relatively tense thriller, with a decent level of intrigue, a smart FL who was able to outmaneuvre the antagonist, etc.
But the giant magical worm with a weakness to salt has just ruined all tension and intrigue, and demoted this to another bland fantasy reincarnation story.
Also how did the count even know where she’d be on her secret fetch quest to send an assassin?