Utter garbage. Can’t grasp why people would say this is good.
The story is rushed and shallow, skipping just about all that matters.
Characters lack depth and consistency, the art is poor, the tone varies from silly to adult, apparently at random.
This is a great cautionary example of how to write a bad story.
Goaties
Utter garbage. Can’t grasp why people would say this is good.
The story is rushed and shallow, skipping just about all that matters.
Characters lack depth and consistency, the art is poor, the tone varies from silly to adult, apparently at random.
This is a great cautionary example of how to write a bad story.
Devils_bottomLine
That position is deadly😃….. her stomach sir 🫢what weapon are you wielding 😰
anygay if this is the ending that’s sweet but you can’t tell me she isn’t or won’t be preggers
Neko-san
Is this the ending?
DarkRoseCharm
Best couple ever
Asia0511
Why does this feel like an ending I need twenty more chapters
Marrika
@raven I believe this is the end at best it’s only a couple more chapters because I think they coming home is the end of the novel.
Ashval
I hope not I want to see some little ones running around
RavenJovan
Ending at 52? Or at least it feels like it.