Summary
Read My Childhood Friends Are trying to Kill Me
Not only was I absurdly reincarnated into a character destined to die, but I was also sent to a sacred neutral zone where the five imperial princes gathered, in place of the crown prince. That means… my childhood friends think I’m the crown prince, or more accurately, a man. “Goodbye, guys.” I cried my heart out, bidding farewell to my friends whom I might never see again. It’s because I (the crown prince) was officially scheduled to die soon! Guys, it was fun being with you, and even though I won’t be able to see you again, I hope you all live happily! Many years later. The heroes who defeated the great dragon, my childhood friends, came looking for me. “Is that you? The one who killed my friend?” “You killed the former crown prince and have been living a luxurious life as a princess?” “I’ll torture you to death as painfully as possible.” “Answer me. Why did you kill him?” Naturally, they didn’t recognize me at all. No, the problem isn’t that they didn’t recognize me… My childhood friends are trying to kill me! Wait, guys, hold on a second!
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I have so many questions.
1. What happened to the original FL at the end of the story?
2. Did the FMC forgive her dad and two brothers? (If it happens, it will be kind of very disappointing.)
3. In which chapter of the novel did the FL tell her childhood friends that she was actually Leo? (I read the novel and dropped it at chapter 50+ because I was tired of the story focusing on obtaining things and the favourability level. I was getting tired of it.)
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I read the novel I dropped it in chapter 50+ the story focusing on cheating system, obtaining things and the favourability level. I was getting tired of it.
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– Regarding the cheating system: The person dislikes that the FL’s alchemist abilities come from the system rather than her own skills, finding it uninteresting and making the story dull.
– Role of the main character: They are frustrated that the system makes the MC act like a supporting character, working hard for the adopted FL’s benefit instead of being the focus.
– MC’s lying: The constant lying of the MC to her childhood friends without a good reason annoys the reader.
– Story progression: The story becomes repetitive and boring as the MC uses the cheating system to obtain things in a tiresome routine, causing the reader to skip chapters.
– Favourability aspect: The way favourability is handled in the story is also disliked as it has changed the story from its initial appeal.
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Okay, here is the text with corrected grammar:
Okay, spoiler. The female lead (FL) got a cheating system that allows her to be an alchemist, but she isn’t actually an alchemist. It’s all the system’s work, which is kind of lame, and the story becomes boring and not as interesting as it was in the beginning. I’m not really a fan of the cheating system, sorry.
Secondly, the system makes her act more like a supporting character, which is so unfair. The original FL gets more benefits while she works hard to make the original FL happier, which is really unfair. The original FL is just adopted, and the main character (MC) is the real daughter princess here. Tsk tsk, the author wants the MC to be more miserable to make the story longer. Bro, lame.
Thirdly, the MC keeps lying to her childhood friends, and for what reason? Why not just tell them the truth? This part of her lying is really getting on my nerves.
Fourthly, the story becomes more and more lame and boring when, because of that “cheating system,” the MC starts obtaining things and doing annoying things just for the sake of obtaining things. It’s like that kind of routine again and again, and I’m getting really bored. I’m actually starting to skip chapters.
And lastly, there’s the favourability aspect, which is becoming more annoying, and the story has become different from how it started.
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lol the heck with this app I’m using just to correct my grammar still stated in the sentence π€¦ββοΈπ€¦ββοΈ
mysticwitchy
Tbh it’s really good, although the plot isn’t absolutely mind blowing, it’s executed well. I’m excited for more chapters
duma18084
soo good and interesting,the arts is nice can’t wait more
Tatianaaa
Idgaf about the backstory can we just skip to the main story? π
howtocry
Read the novel a big while back. The manhwa is already going at a faster pace than the novel so I’d say we are getting past the backstory by chaoter 25…? Honestly the plot is a roller coaster and the romance is not super vanilla from what I remember… definitely reccomend reading before judging bc everyone has their own tastes >_<
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EDIT: so the yellow haired guy is the main ml? finally not the original ml i am getting tired isekaid FL getting the original ml.
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so the yellow haired guy is the main ml? finally not the original ml i am getting tired isekaid ml getting the original ml.
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the plot is typical but somehow different
YukioKouri
Trash, i don’t care about the back story just get to the freaking main story
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@yukiokouri right wasting chapters π