This does not make any sense. The father didn’t say “you’re not doing good, return to the territory!” He said “If it’s difficult, you may return to the territory anytime.”
So this bet the mc makes does not make any sense, none at all. Also, it does not feel rewarding to the readers when the mc completes his quests, wich is very unsatisfying.
We also don’t really ge to see the struggles he has/had to go through, wich makes this even less rewarding and satisfying for the reader.
All in all, it’s not good so far.. I can only hope thqt it gets better…
K@m
Envy….. shut up please why yap so much u are here to read fantasy why are u obsessed with logic
Envy
This does not make any sense. The father didn’t say “you’re not doing good, return to the territory!” He said “If it’s difficult, you may return to the territory anytime.”
So this bet the mc makes does not make any sense, none at all. Also, it does not feel rewarding to the readers when the mc completes his quests, wich is very unsatisfying.
We also don’t really ge to see the struggles he has/had to go through, wich makes this even less rewarding and satisfying for the reader.
All in all, it’s not good so far.. I can only hope thqt it gets better…
Riesh_
About the father thing, at first. I think you should think about ‘diversity in perception’!