First off, really TN? Defining ambush? How brain-dead do you think your reader base is exactly?
Now, the author is being extremely clever in how they bend the common tropes employed here. So standard urban dungeon style story but the guilds are effectively no better than street gangs fighting for territory. This I like so far.
Aluminum being orichalcum is an brilliant way to cross the divide between our world and the logic of the dungeon. Kudos so far. Hope it keeps up this kind of out of the box thinking.
Also nice to see limits on how much he can carry of one particular thing. Slow but steady and appreciable progression makes it worth the struggle and makes you want to root for the MC.
Razzirin
First off, really TN? Defining ambush? How brain-dead do you think your reader base is exactly?
Now, the author is being extremely clever in how they bend the common tropes employed here. So standard urban dungeon style story but the guilds are effectively no better than street gangs fighting for territory. This I like so far.
Aluminum being orichalcum is an brilliant way to cross the divide between our world and the logic of the dungeon. Kudos so far. Hope it keeps up this kind of out of the box thinking.
Also nice to see limits on how much he can carry of one particular thing. Slow but steady and appreciable progression makes it worth the struggle and makes you want to root for the MC.
Defraeter
I think the average reader is often very young. Anyway i agree with you.