I don’t understand what’s up with this story. Even as a queen, she cannot ignore the wishes and pleas of her vassals. Also, you can’t force people into servitude due to your whims.
im just going over the chapters to see if the story improved yet and….it has not, apparently. I’m sure the author, the artist, and the translators have worked hard on this manhwa and I praise them for their dedication. However, a little unwarranted advice here….misunderstandings are not always needed to drive your plot, or to be the main foundation of your story.
To make misunderstandings work, you need an actual reason for the FL to be skeptical of her husbands intentions, not just the mere words of an assassin. What drove her to his conclusion? What makes the ML a suspicious person? Make the misunderstanding make sense. Give her a reason to doubting him, like make him a psychopath who kills people lol
This feels like someone’s first attempt at writing and I’m not here to shame them for it, I just think they should take a couple writing classes or focus on improving the characters and plot of this story.
Wtf he was her fiance 1st! They have a child together! Also it’s clear as a day they queen is abusing her power and trying to hurt a innocent person. Also the whole assassin thing hasn’t been cleared up? there is zero reason why the FL hasn’t explained why she ran off…. the story is frustrating ? the audience knows to much and the characters know to little and are stupid.
Lordium
I don’t understand what’s up with this story. Even as a queen, she cannot ignore the wishes and pleas of her vassals. Also, you can’t force people into servitude due to your whims.
baby im not even here.....im hallucination
im just going over the chapters to see if the story improved yet and….it has not, apparently. I’m sure the author, the artist, and the translators have worked hard on this manhwa and I praise them for their dedication. However, a little unwarranted advice here….misunderstandings are not always needed to drive your plot, or to be the main foundation of your story.
To make misunderstandings work, you need an actual reason for the FL to be skeptical of her husbands intentions, not just the mere words of an assassin. What drove her to his conclusion? What makes the ML a suspicious person? Make the misunderstanding make sense. Give her a reason to doubting him, like make him a psychopath who kills people lol
This feels like someone’s first attempt at writing and I’m not here to shame them for it, I just think they should take a couple writing classes or focus on improving the characters and plot of this story.
Changemyname
Wtf he was her fiance 1st! They have a child together! Also it’s clear as a day they queen is abusing her power and trying to hurt a innocent person. Also the whole assassin thing hasn’t been cleared up? there is zero reason why the FL hasn’t explained why she ran off…. the story is frustrating ? the audience knows to much and the characters know to little and are stupid.
Catfish
I’m dropping this now…so boring and annoying ? if the translators will not drop this,then I probably come back once the ending has published… goodbye