I agree with the others, her not going “God damn it! Not those guys too!” is just stupid -.- She already KNOWS of the Star Keeper and his mind magic.
And speaking of: What is author thinking, making the villain THIS overpowered? And not just op, but the “problem to solve/overcome” is already a massive mountain Ô.o Author will write themselves into a corner at this rate. Till now it worked, but stakes need to be build up proper, not “Here´s the evil god snapping their finger at the start of the arc”. The nobles are already mind fogged, ok, fine. But even her friends??? That grabs anything the protag has, leaves no room for plans, hopes and the crushing of both. The protag basically runs on willpower and hero-buffs alone, and that´s… well… cheap -.-
Why not go the classic route: Her friends are in the dark with the mind foggery, and only notice the “bad behavior” of the nobles here, and go from there? Maybe not make the nobles S.K. slaves, but “snap them out of it” when the prince gets pissed, revealing a weakness of the S.K.? Something like “the mind stuff can be broken by chars of the same world, so not the protag who is a mixed soul or something”?
What just happened here, 😮😮😮😮😨😨😨😨😨😨😨😰😰😰😨😨😨😨😰😰😰. Enosh, the crown prince and lady Lillian just turned their backs towards Eileen, like seeing her presence, is like some type of a nuisance to them, damn those star keepers, their trying to ruin some long term relationships and connections with our lady.
LadyLombardy
hostility*
LadyLombardy
isn’t this too repetitive? did the author lack creativity? it’s getting boring relying on groundless hostilidade to create conflict.
captioanima
I agree with the others, her not going “God damn it! Not those guys too!” is just stupid -.- She already KNOWS of the Star Keeper and his mind magic.
And speaking of: What is author thinking, making the villain THIS overpowered? And not just op, but the “problem to solve/overcome” is already a massive mountain Ô.o Author will write themselves into a corner at this rate. Till now it worked, but stakes need to be build up proper, not “Here´s the evil god snapping their finger at the start of the arc”. The nobles are already mind fogged, ok, fine. But even her friends??? That grabs anything the protag has, leaves no room for plans, hopes and the crushing of both. The protag basically runs on willpower and hero-buffs alone, and that´s… well… cheap -.-
Why not go the classic route: Her friends are in the dark with the mind foggery, and only notice the “bad behavior” of the nobles here, and go from there? Maybe not make the nobles S.K. slaves, but “snap them out of it” when the prince gets pissed, revealing a weakness of the S.K.? Something like “the mind stuff can be broken by chars of the same world, so not the protag who is a mixed soul or something”?
Snowshyrat
What just happened here, 😮😮😮😮😨😨😨😨😨😨😨😰😰😰😨😨😨😨😰😰😰. Enosh, the crown prince and lady Lillian just turned their backs towards Eileen, like seeing her presence, is like some type of a nuisance to them, damn those star keepers, their trying to ruin some long term relationships and connections with our lady.
Aizheno
Why the character bit by bit not beautiful. As she grew up she is getting dumber already. I don’t get it…
deadteletubby
Ah yes the classic “I’m not gonna fall for that! then immediately falls for it” girl boss up alr
Silent reader
Why is FL getting dumber and weaker as she grew. She already get all the Op buff. Be a proper dragon!
Changemyname
Really drawing out this star keeper nonsense 😒
randombookloverr
Wait what???
TheMarsh
bruh,