@fetusmetus THANK YOU I understand dramatic stories needing a drawn out plot if it’s very complex, but I feel like this story doesn’t execute it very well. With those types of stories, things need to keep happening in-between the main story to keep readers hooked.
But this story has nothing that is making me wanna keep reading more. It’s chapter 87 and the real story has yet to begin.
This is where there is supposed to be tension, drama and high stakes. Especially if they’re going for that “war-against-each-other” plot.
when will something finally happen. this story is kinda boring and predictable. they just happened to make the kids hair blond same as Jermey. scandal alert .
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I completely forgot FL had nature magic. Not that magic seemed to serve a purpose in the plot so far.
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@fetusmetus THANK YOU I understand dramatic stories needing a drawn out plot if it’s very complex, but I feel like this story doesn’t execute it very well. With those types of stories, things need to keep happening in-between the main story to keep readers hooked.
But this story has nothing that is making me wanna keep reading more. It’s chapter 87 and the real story has yet to begin.
This is where there is supposed to be tension, drama and high stakes. Especially if they’re going for that “war-against-each-other” plot.
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@fetusmetus I agree. The past several chapters have been boring and slow.
fetusmetus
when will something finally happen. this story is kinda boring and predictable. they just happened to make the kids hair blond same as Jermey. scandal alert .