The story’s pa e is too fast. Not much suspense or moments to savour the heartwarming moments because the story automatically drops a bomb. I like the story, really, but the pace and events are too much at once.
The beginning translations for pronouns were incorrect.
The prince says to Karina, “Just because I abandoned YOU, doesn’t mean YOU can go to Elyon.” Not ‘she.’ Also the cage is for Elicia, he plans to cage her there.
Volataire
The story’s pa e is too fast. Not much suspense or moments to savour the heartwarming moments because the story automatically drops a bomb. I like the story, really, but the pace and events are too much at once.
amandanz
The beginning translations for pronouns were incorrect.
The prince says to Karina, “Just because I abandoned YOU, doesn’t mean YOU can go to Elyon.” Not ‘she.’ Also the cage is for Elicia, he plans to cage her there.
Ali027
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