Hmm the panels are really pretty and well shot (like watching a movie) but..the reactions are always so serious. I get that students are competitive in korea and society there also have a problem of pressuring kids to do well.
But our fl can’t even catch a break for 1 chapter? She’s always so tense and even as a reader I feel like I gotta walk on eggshell so as not to trigger her or something it’s exhausting.
And She’s not tense bc of her personality it’s a byproduct of her environment and the shiz she went through. That’s why it would be better paced if for the whole chapter let her genuinely enjoy her time with friends, hanging out and just being a normal kid for once
It’s okay for your character to be happy. let them enjoy their cake for a while, i don’t understand the constant drama that needs to happen as soon as She’s happy, it gets taken away from her.
Kimchi_pancake
Hmm the panels are really pretty and well shot (like watching a movie) but..the reactions are always so serious. I get that students are competitive in korea and society there also have a problem of pressuring kids to do well.
But our fl can’t even catch a break for 1 chapter? She’s always so tense and even as a reader I feel like I gotta walk on eggshell so as not to trigger her or something it’s exhausting.
And She’s not tense bc of her personality it’s a byproduct of her environment and the shiz she went through. That’s why it would be better paced if for the whole chapter let her genuinely enjoy her time with friends, hanging out and just being a normal kid for once
It’s okay for your character to be happy. let them enjoy their cake for a while, i don’t understand the constant drama that needs to happen as soon as She’s happy, it gets taken away from her.