I like that there’s an actual main story starting now after all the chaos and side-quests.
If I were the author, I would go back at this point and revisit the beginning now before publishing the whole work. I’d change the “I witnessed uncle sabotaging the carriage” into “I think uncle must be resposible because he’s the one who will profit the most”.
Then I would add some elements to all the side-stories so that they too will have some kind of connection with the main storyline about the whole murder-plot and war-monging. Plus maybe some red herrings, like a possible involvement of the royal family or whatnot…
Eveaustria
I like that there’s an actual main story starting now after all the chaos and side-quests.
If I were the author, I would go back at this point and revisit the beginning now before publishing the whole work. I’d change the “I witnessed uncle sabotaging the carriage” into “I think uncle must be resposible because he’s the one who will profit the most”.
Then I would add some elements to all the side-stories so that they too will have some kind of connection with the main storyline about the whole murder-plot and war-monging. Plus maybe some red herrings, like a possible involvement of the royal family or whatnot…