if you wanna know then read it lol …. but basically the other person doesn’t like how the author is making layla “WEAK” which theres a reason behind it if people pay attention to her past story from the beginning of the chapters lol so i explained how the author is doing her story, plus people forget what type of timeline this story takes place
There are so many things I wanted to say up until this point.. I read the comments and Layla is not stupid, Matthias loves her etc. First of all, I would like to state that English is not my mother tongue, so what I will try to explain may be a little incomplete. Let’s talk about love. Matthias’ love is not a type of love that people will understand. He is someone who prioritizes his own selfishness and ensures that the person’s honor is broken and harms the other person by knowing everything without any misunderstandings and knowing the consequences of his choices. After breaking her honor and destroying her dreams, I do not see the help given as help but as manipulation and using her for his own interests. The extremely weak character of Layla irritates me. Now you will say that her conditions were like that. But friends, Layla is a person who successfully graduated from school and has the capacity to interpret people’s behavior towards her very well, in other words, she is very smart. This is where what we call stupidity begins, she makes the most Pollyanna-like choices despite knowing these things. I understood this in this section, ignoring her uncle who worked hard for her.You can break up with Kyle but say that bad is bad and take your money and enroll in school and leave but he insists on stupid and childish choices until the end. A person should not throw away their dreams so easily. And I want to say this to novel writers, do not make female characters so weak anymore, out of 10 novels I read, there are only 1 or 2 people who I can call strong characters, the rest are all the same.. like they are produced in the same factory. Note: I say these as a person who has experienced difficulties in the real world and has seen people who have difficulties worse than this girl, stop drawing women so weak and in need of help from others.
you cant tell an author how to write their story …if you don’t like how the FL is then read something else ….She made layla that way for a reason you forget ‘layla is traumatized since child hood and has anxiety of people rejecting her and hitting her because of who she is, Layla had no one to help her, Layla wants to be excepted and kyle’s mom broke her on purpose…. is not a situation where you can become strong right away she has depression cuz of it …..thats why in the end she will end up with matthias cuz hes the only one who will fight head on over layla he wont care what anyone thinks of layla …but thats how the author is going to make this story, and kyle wont fight for layla at all instead he tries to run away with layla instead of confronting his mom and say this is the girl for me, his love is not strong enough for layla at all. …this is a just a fake story is not real and obviously this story is not in the same timeline as ours… yall forget this timeline is at a time where rich and poor was divided so it was also hard for layla to stand up for her self in these times, again the timeline is different and yall keep forgetting about that
I am aware that Kyle’s mother hurt her on purpose. And I am aware that Kyle is too cowardly to fight for her. I didn’t even feel the need to criticize Kyle because I think Kyle is the most useless character among these characters. My comment is that what Matthias does is generally called love and I explained it in my previous answer. And I don’t interfere with what the author writes, I criticize it, it is my right as a reader. Whether I continue this or not is none of your business. I made a realistic comment without acting like a 100% fanatic and considering the time it was written. I would also like to point out that even though Layla was traumatized by the things she experienced in her childhood, she also experienced love. There were people around her who appreciated her. And she was given the opportunity to get an education, it was her own decision to react to people’s greed and jealousy in an extremely naive way like a Pollyanna and let it affect her.
Another nice explanation from Instagram @intan_story_corner
This chapter doesn’t erupt-it exhales. And in that quiet breath, something in both Matthias and Layla begins to shift, gently but deeply.
There’s an unfamiliar softness in Matthias today. He looks for her-not out of anger, but habit. Maybe even concern, though he’d never name it that. Hearing her cry doesn’t bring satisfaction. It brings a pause. A stillness he isn’t used to.
• “She’s quite a fool,” he thought, snickering…
But even that feels like a performance. Beneath the surface, there’s restlessness. Her absence doesn’t feel like relief-it feels like something is missing. Not seeing her doesn’t free him. It unsettles him.
• “He started to wonder if he had been too greedy in desiring someone so pathetic.”
Not greedy in the usual sense-but emotionally. Wanting too much from someone already unraveling.
Meanwhile, Layla is no longer clinging. She wakes from more than just fever-she wakes from denial. There’s a calmness in her now. Not joy, but peace-the kind that comes from finally letting go.
• “The clearer this reality became in her mind, the more peaceful her heart felt.”
Her words to Kyle are quiet, but firm.
• “I’m not going to college… I’m not going to marry you either.”
It’s not rebellion. It’s clarity. She isn’t reaching for anyone anymore-just herself.
This chapter doesn’t cry out.
It simply breathes.
Layla stops pretending.
And in that silence, everything begins to change.
I took a peek coz I thought it might have been more pleasant or maybe I was wrong knowing in advance where would all this go… Not that it matters, but it didn’t. In one chapter I caught up with almost everyone.
Peacebreaker
what you guys yapping about? make it short lmao.
Senia14
@Peacebreaker
if you wanna know then read it lol …. but basically the other person doesn’t like how the author is making layla “WEAK” which theres a reason behind it if people pay attention to her past story from the beginning of the chapters lol so i explained how the author is doing her story, plus people forget what type of timeline this story takes place
Wenomx
There are so many things I wanted to say up until this point.. I read the comments and Layla is not stupid, Matthias loves her etc. First of all, I would like to state that English is not my mother tongue, so what I will try to explain may be a little incomplete. Let’s talk about love. Matthias’ love is not a type of love that people will understand. He is someone who prioritizes his own selfishness and ensures that the person’s honor is broken and harms the other person by knowing everything without any misunderstandings and knowing the consequences of his choices. After breaking her honor and destroying her dreams, I do not see the help given as help but as manipulation and using her for his own interests. The extremely weak character of Layla irritates me. Now you will say that her conditions were like that. But friends, Layla is a person who successfully graduated from school and has the capacity to interpret people’s behavior towards her very well, in other words, she is very smart. This is where what we call stupidity begins, she makes the most Pollyanna-like choices despite knowing these things. I understood this in this section, ignoring her uncle who worked hard for her.You can break up with Kyle but say that bad is bad and take your money and enroll in school and leave but he insists on stupid and childish choices until the end. A person should not throw away their dreams so easily. And I want to say this to novel writers, do not make female characters so weak anymore, out of 10 novels I read, there are only 1 or 2 people who I can call strong characters, the rest are all the same.. like they are produced in the same factory. Note: I say these as a person who has experienced difficulties in the real world and has seen people who have difficulties worse than this girl, stop drawing women so weak and in need of help from others.
Senia14
@Wenomx
you cant tell an author how to write their story …if you don’t like how the FL is then read something else ….She made layla that way for a reason you forget ‘layla is traumatized since child hood and has anxiety of people rejecting her and hitting her because of who she is, Layla had no one to help her, Layla wants to be excepted and kyle’s mom broke her on purpose…. is not a situation where you can become strong right away she has depression cuz of it …..thats why in the end she will end up with matthias cuz hes the only one who will fight head on over layla he wont care what anyone thinks of layla …but thats how the author is going to make this story, and kyle wont fight for layla at all instead he tries to run away with layla instead of confronting his mom and say this is the girl for me, his love is not strong enough for layla at all. …this is a just a fake story is not real and obviously this story is not in the same timeline as ours… yall forget this timeline is at a time where rich and poor was divided so it was also hard for layla to stand up for her self in these times, again the timeline is different and yall keep forgetting about that
Wenomx
I am aware that Kyle’s mother hurt her on purpose. And I am aware that Kyle is too cowardly to fight for her. I didn’t even feel the need to criticize Kyle because I think Kyle is the most useless character among these characters. My comment is that what Matthias does is generally called love and I explained it in my previous answer. And I don’t interfere with what the author writes, I criticize it, it is my right as a reader. Whether I continue this or not is none of your business. I made a realistic comment without acting like a 100% fanatic and considering the time it was written. I would also like to point out that even though Layla was traumatized by the things she experienced in her childhood, she also experienced love. There were people around her who appreciated her. And she was given the opportunity to get an education, it was her own decision to react to people’s greed and jealousy in an extremely naive way like a Pollyanna and let it affect her.
Senia14
Another nice explanation from Instagram @intan_story_corner
This chapter doesn’t erupt-it exhales. And in that quiet breath, something in both Matthias and Layla begins to shift, gently but deeply.
There’s an unfamiliar softness in Matthias today. He looks for her-not out of anger, but habit. Maybe even concern, though he’d never name it that. Hearing her cry doesn’t bring satisfaction. It brings a pause. A stillness he isn’t used to.
• “She’s quite a fool,” he thought, snickering…
But even that feels like a performance. Beneath the surface, there’s restlessness. Her absence doesn’t feel like relief-it feels like something is missing. Not seeing her doesn’t free him. It unsettles him.
• “He started to wonder if he had been too greedy in desiring someone so pathetic.”
Not greedy in the usual sense-but emotionally. Wanting too much from someone already unraveling.
Meanwhile, Layla is no longer clinging. She wakes from more than just fever-she wakes from denial. There’s a calmness in her now. Not joy, but peace-the kind that comes from finally letting go.
• “The clearer this reality became in her mind, the more peaceful her heart felt.”
Her words to Kyle are quiet, but firm.
• “I’m not going to college… I’m not going to marry you either.”
It’s not rebellion. It’s clarity. She isn’t reaching for anyone anymore-just herself.
This chapter doesn’t cry out.
It simply breathes.
Layla stops pretending.
And in that silence, everything begins to change.
MexicanMary
I took a peek coz I thought it might have been more pleasant or maybe I was wrong knowing in advance where would all this go… Not that it matters, but it didn’t. In one chapter I caught up with almost everyone.