The roof starting coming down on them not because he found the stella fragment, but because in those minutes, the red chief started fighting just above them. The ceiling split open so they climbed out, and ended up right in front of the red chief. This is fine writing.
What terrible writing! The group of three newbies has an adventure lasting several hours, while the leader, the red mage, in “the same time”, barely has time for a few minutes of combat… it’s ridiculous…
Wulfgar
The roof starting coming down on them not because he found the stella fragment, but because in those minutes, the red chief started fighting just above them. The ceiling split open so they climbed out, and ended up right in front of the red chief. This is fine writing.
Defraeter
What terrible writing! The group of three newbies has an adventure lasting several hours, while the leader, the red mage, in “the same time”, barely has time for a few minutes of combat… it’s ridiculous…