This was kinda anticlimactic. From a funny snowball fight that took about 85% of the chapter to “oh by the way, he found her” and fin. I would’ve preferred if the chapter ended with Derebeth showing up and in the next chapter wrapping everyting up with an epilogue. But this is nagging on olympic level I guess.
But nonetheless I loved the story. Will definitely read it again.
Caladria
This was kinda anticlimactic. From a funny snowball fight that took about 85% of the chapter to “oh by the way, he found her” and fin. I would’ve preferred if the chapter ended with Derebeth showing up and in the next chapter wrapping everyting up with an epilogue. But this is nagging on olympic level I guess.
But nonetheless I loved the story. Will definitely read it again.