I love the art but the story seems to be all over the place. Up until this point, the FL should have already begin to see things that reminded her of her past and the people she loved before. The fact that she’s on guard against the ML about his actions and the way in which he resolves problems and treats her should begin to light some red lights about him and his motives… but she doesn’t question anything, she doesn’t make an effort to remember her past, she’s just there, existing as a character with no development whatsoever. if this doesn’t change I will end up hating her guts!
kcverastegui
I love the art but the story seems to be all over the place. Up until this point, the FL should have already begin to see things that reminded her of her past and the people she loved before. The fact that she’s on guard against the ML about his actions and the way in which he resolves problems and treats her should begin to light some red lights about him and his motives… but she doesn’t question anything, she doesn’t make an effort to remember her past, she’s just there, existing as a character with no development whatsoever. if this doesn’t change I will end up hating her guts!