I agree with those complaints – so many people at this picnic, well-known nobles, kids and their guards; we saw how close the tables were to the water before too – but the author still makes us believe that someone could kidnap a child from such a crowdy place unnoticed; and suddenly the brother has a large suitcase that appeared from nowhere? Unfortunately it’s also a trope often seen in movies or TV-series…
This is so rushed and dumb. He just said it’s just a bait, do they really think he stuffed her in a suitcase risking her life in the process??? Think, girlie, think 🤔 why is she so dumb
Am I the only one who’s feeling like the plot is so damn rushed?
There’s a lot of people on that party, and it’s hosted on an open area, so you’re telling me that nobody able to saw that?, what is this bullshit?. Also, I feel like ML action is suddenly so restricted, I feel like he suddenly becomes a passive character, all I see is FL doing the work.
I had to re-read Amy testimony to see if the timeline match with the scene of crime, and judging by the color of the daytime, bruh, it’s a bunch of horse shit, blonde dude is a teleporter.
So close to the truth about their fairy mother……
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Here a few short SPOILERS
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brother will die being shot by someone the bastard dominic hired (ml uncle)reveals truth about mother
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Dominic will lose a gun duel against Fabian become paralyzzed and dies richard gets title
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no more fabian is ML in that novel and yes side stories Larissa and Richard gets married /engaged
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Do hope they change a few bits and pieces in this version compared to novel cause these girls deserve to meet their mother
Eveaustria
I agree with those complaints – so many people at this picnic, well-known nobles, kids and their guards; we saw how close the tables were to the water before too – but the author still makes us believe that someone could kidnap a child from such a crowdy place unnoticed; and suddenly the brother has a large suitcase that appeared from nowhere? Unfortunately it’s also a trope often seen in movies or TV-series…
xnaysilvousplait
This is so rushed and dumb. He just said it’s just a bait, do they really think he stuffed her in a suitcase risking her life in the process??? Think, girlie, think 🤔 why is she so dumb
EarthPotato
Am I the only one who’s feeling like the plot is so damn rushed?
There’s a lot of people on that party, and it’s hosted on an open area, so you’re telling me that nobody able to saw that?, what is this bullshit?. Also, I feel like ML action is suddenly so restricted, I feel like he suddenly becomes a passive character, all I see is FL doing the work.
I had to re-read Amy testimony to see if the timeline match with the scene of crime, and judging by the color of the daytime, bruh, it’s a bunch of horse shit, blonde dude is a teleporter.
lemonbooo
I had a seizure reading this
ThisDunceReads
So close to the truth about their fairy mother……
.
.
.
Here a few short SPOILERS
.
brother will die being shot by someone the bastard dominic hired (ml uncle)reveals truth about mother
.
Dominic will lose a gun duel against Fabian become paralyzzed and dies richard gets title
.
no more fabian is ML in that novel and yes side stories Larissa and Richard gets married /engaged
.
.
Do hope they change a few bits and pieces in this version compared to novel cause these girls deserve to meet their mother
AureBa
The train is probably the bait?
Arrloc
Oh good I hope Richard does manage to save her